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Friends from a shadow. (corrected)

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sophie, who was 15 years old. She was tall, slim, and had a fair complexion. She also had long hair in a pony tail, and felt she couldn’t fit in. Maybe it was because she was in a new neighbourhood, a new school, a new district, maybe it was because of that. But the thing is, she didn’t feel happy, she had no friends! Life is really boring without friends, but even when she tried really hard to get one, they stared at her, and dashed to the door. Okey, it’s true, she had a particular style, she wasn’t a fashion lover as the other girls there, but that couldn’t be a reason to ignore her... or could it?

However, that day, Sophie was walking out of school, alone, when she found out somebody was following her. She stopped, the shadow behind her did it too, she moved one step, and so it did. Somebody was chasing her! She walked two more blocks just to be sure, and then, she started strolling very slowly. When the shadow was near enough, she turned back, and said “hello!”. The shadow turned into two girls said who said hello too, and they told her they were new at the neighbourhood and they knew nobody, so they walked and chatted together for a while, and accorded to meet the next morning at school. Sophie was so excited, she had friends! Real, nice, kind friends! But actually, that was the last time she ever saw them.

Friends from another time (corrected)

Charlie was twelve when he found an old shabby mirror in his basement. He had never seen it because his parents didn’t allow him to go there but he wasn’t doing what his parents had told him.
When he stood in front of the mirror he didn’t see himself, there was another person copying what he was doing. Charlie was shocked. Then the person came out of the mirror and introduced himself as John and quickly went to an old huge wardrobe and started looking at and moving the coats. Suddenly a girl came out and told Charlie she was Amanda, John’s best friend. Charlie asked why they were there and they told him that by the mirror and the wardrobe someone could travel in time. They were from 1961. Charlie, Amanda and John started talking and playing. By the evening they were very good friends.
When Charlie heard his parents entering in the house, they arranged to meet the next day.
That night, while Charlie and his family were having dinner, his father told them they were moving to Australia. Charlie didn’t want to and this surprised his parents because he didn’t like the town they lived in. Although he insisted very much in staying, the decision was made.Two weeks later, one day before he moved, Charlie gave Amanda and John the bad news: They weren’t going to see each other again. They were all sad because they had been very good friends those two weeks. When Charlie’s parents arrived home he said goodbye forever. That was the last time he ever saw them.

Thick

The summer holidays were starting and Kate and her friends were planning what to do to have fun more than ever because they have been graduate after so much effort. They lived in Beverly Hills so the beach and parties are everyday things. They were looking something beyond of common.

Some of them wanted to go to the beach, others wanted to go to the mountains. Some of them wanted a relaxed holidays and others wanted the most active ones but nothing was perfect for everybody.

They never be in agreement even Jake the shier of the group said that his grandmother has got a house in Forks, a wet and deserted place but he said the house was cosy and peaceful. There was a forest near the house. It was perfect! There were tranquility and action in the nature. Everybody said it would be excellent.

The preparations started. John prepared his 4x4, Dave, the joke´s guy put all the beers he could get in the car, Cindy, the trendy one, put all her cosmetics, and Kate only her favorite book and a diary.

It was Saturday morning, and everybody was on the car ready to go.

After many hours they arrived the place. The house was very big but tacky and deserted. They started to investigate the surroundings.

It was a dark night and everybody wants to go to the forest but Kate was very afraid so she stayed in the house and saw how everybody was entering in the thick forest. That was the last time she ever saw them.

The two Women (corrected)

If I remember well, there was a dark night in the 1999, when, while I was walking from work to my house, I saw them for the first time. They were discussing in a very loud voice, so I could hear and understand them perfectly, one of them was very angry, she said that se couldn´t understand why the blonde woman, who was very tall and slim, had done that. The conversation was turning more and more aggressive, so I decided to walk faster and arrive home sooner.

But, also from my bedroom I could hear the two women, arguing and fighting, every night since that day, I was very worried about that, I couldn´t think of any other thing. I made a lot of theories about what the problems between them were, without forgetting any detail and the only one that convinced me more, was that they were old friends, but one day the blonde one, had said something about the other that she was not supposed to say, but I didn´t know what and the intrigue was killing me.

Three weeks after I started thinking about that, when I was going out from my house, I recognized them in the other corner of the street, but this time their argument was not normal, it was very violent, so I decided to enter to my house and call the police. But, while I was talking to them, I heard one shot. Since then, I have never heard about these women, so I can´t know who died or not, and what was the true about this mistery. That was the last time I saw them.

The phone call

It was a normal Sunday; it was a raining day, so we decided to stay at home.
We lived in the suburbs, in Palermo. My family was composed by my wife Judith, our two children, Diana and Mathew and me, David. We were all sitting in the sofa seeing our favourite program on TV, ‘TVR’, when the phone rang. I answered because I was waiting a call of a friend. However, the person on the phone was not my friend, it was a strange voice which said “I know who you are, and where you live”, and then he hanged up. Then my wife asked me who had been on the phone and I replied that was a mistaken call. I have felt very nervous since that moment. The next day, when I was about getting into my car in order to go home, after a long working day, two big men came to me and one said ‘Come with us, Mr. Johnson’. I agreed. They took me to a shabby and filthy place in a deserted street.
They took me with their boss who said me that if I didn’t give him the money that I owed, he was going to kill one of my children. I replied ‘everything, but not that’. I asked him if he could give me one more week to get the money and he said determined ’You have 24 hours more or the consequences’. The next morning, when I was at the kitchen, having my breakfast, I realised that Diana was not at home. I got very worried, and I decided to call the man who I owed the money and ask him if he had done something to my daughter. He answered ‘The time is over’.
‘What are you going to do with her?’- I asked desperate.
‘Nothing so bad’, ten he hanged up.
I decided to call the police asking for help. They offered help, they tried their best but after a month of searching and searching they resigned, and me too.
That Monday, when everything seemed to be happiness, the worst happened.
That day was the last time I ever saw my beautiful Diana.

Amaizing but truth.

It was a normal Saturday, I was with my friend Charise, we played, talked about our life, and laughed all the day. When the club get dark we went to her house (it was inside the club), we dress with our trendy clothes.

We went to have dinner to the restaurant, and awhile later we went away to walking along the whole club.

Suddenly, I don’t remember why we start to fight. It fight become so loudly and we said to ourselves things so ugly that I do not want to remember.  She had said to me that I did not want to meet any more, and to take revenge what she had said to me wish the death her, yes! I said to her that he she should die that I wish the land swallows and does not see her any more. In the same moment the floor opened in two, a horrible monster get out of in. The monster I took her with his hands, and take her to him with.

I was really surprised, I never thought that what I a said Could be truth, but if you ask me I dont fell sad, really I hate her.

And that was the last time I ever saw her.