Emma and Martin had been a couple for seventeen months. They were at high school last year. One day they were at the cinema when Emma met an ex boyfriend, Tom. They started speaking about their life in their last three years so Martin decided to go home, without saing anything. When Emma arrived home she called Martin to see what happened to him. He said he was too jelous with Tom there and Emma told him that Tom was dating a girl called Sara, so he didn´t have to be jelous.A week later Tom called Emma, to invite her and Martin to dinner with him and Sara. Martin was a little angry, because he didn´t want Emma to see Tom again, but he decided to go, to protect Emma from Tom´s hands.
On friday night both couples met at Kansas restaurant. Emma and Tom talked all night long, while Martin and Sara were just there, without saying anything. When Sara and Martin went to the toilet, Tom kissed Emmapass passionately, who putted him away but he was trying to kiss her in any way. Finally she kissed him without taking care of Sara and Martin, who were watching everything. Emma tried to explain the situation to Martin, but he was now too angry with her and Tom. He turned away and started walking to his car. Before getting in there he turned away and smiled ironically. That was the last time he saw them.
Great job!!! Just correct: "...at high school last..." "...started speaking...last three... without..." "..didn't have to be jealous." "...to dinner..." "On Friday night/evening both couples met..." "...without..." "...kissed Emma passionately and put/pushed him..." "Finally... without... watching..." "...tried... with..." "...ironically."
ResponderEliminarSorry butI forgot to write that there's a mistake in the title too: "...uncomfortable..."
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