jueves, 14 de mayo de 2009

Friends from a shadow.


Once upon a time, there was a girl named Sophie, who was 15 years old. She was tall, slim, and had a fair complexion. She also had long hair in a pony tail, and felt she couldn’t fit in. Maybe it was because she was in a new neighbourhood, a new school, a new district, maybe it was because of that. But the thing is, she didn’t feel happy, she had no friends! Life is really boring without friends, but even when she tried really hard to get one, they stared at her, and dashed to the door. Okey, it’s true, she had a particular style, she wasn’t a fashion lover as the other girls there, but that couldn’t be a reason to ignore her... could it?
However, that day, Sophie was walking out of school, alone, when she figured out somebody was following her. She stoped, the shadow behind her did it to, she moved one step, it did it to. Somebody was chasing her! She walked two more blocks just to be sure, and then, she started strolling very slowly. When the shadow was near enough, she turned back, and said “hello!”. The shadow turned into two girls said hello too, and they told her they were new at the neighbourhood and they knew nobody, so they walked and chat together for a while, and accorded to meet the next morning in school. Sophie was so excited, she had friends! Real, nice, kind friends! But actually, that was the last time she ever saw them.

1 comentario:

  1. Great job!! Just correct:"...or could it?" "...she discovered/found out..." "...stopped ... did it too ...and so it did." "... girls who said hello..." "...chatted...at school."

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