The summer holidays were starting and Kate and her friends were planning what to do to have fun more than ever because they have been graduate after so much effort. They lived in Beverly Hills so the beach and parties are everyday things. They were looking something beyond of common.
Some of them wanted to go to the beach, others wanted to go to the mountains. Some of them wanted a relaxed holidays and others wanted the most active ones but nothing was perfect for everybody.
They never be in agreement even Jake the shier of the group said that his grandmother has got a house in Forks, a wet and deserted place but he said the house was cosy and peaceful. There was a forest near the house. It was perfect! There were tranquility and action in the nature. Everybody said it would be excellent.
The preparations started. John prepared his 4x4, Dave, the joke´s guy put all the beers he could get in the car, Cindy, the trendy one, put all her cosmetics, and Kate only her favorite book and a diary.
It was Saturday morning, and everybody was on the car ready to go.
After many hours they arrived the place. The house was very big but tacky and deserted. They started to investigate the surroundings.
It was a dark night and everybody wants to go to the forest but Kate was very afraid so she stayed in the house and saw how everybody was entering in the thick forest. That was the last time she ever saw them.
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