sábado, 9 de mayo de 2009

Not a good experience


Caroline was in first year of high school and she was new there. Time passed very slowly and people looked at her as if she were a strange thing. She tried to make new friends, but people in the class weren't very friendly. However, there was a little group that seem to be quieter than the others.

  That day Caroline went to school and had maths class.There, that group started whispering and poiting at her lots of times, and that made her nervous and made her grin.

  Finally the bell rang. She was never happier to hear the bell. She wanted to run out of the classroom but in her way, Paul stopped her. Caroline started shuddering. But he only wanted to introduce her his group of firneds by going out after class. After some weeks they were practically best firends.

  In the next few there was a big change in their relationship.She noticed that they were getting away up to a point where they hardly spoke. They did not say hello, they avoided her and that depressed her. Going to school became the most horrible thing she had experienced.

  They changed companions with the time, because of school rules, and they rarely saw each other until the day she crossed Paul again. He told her that they knew about a rumor that Caroline suffered a serious illness that when she got nervous she started fighting, so they did not want to take that risk. That was the last time she saw them.

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  1. Great job! Just correct: "...good experience." "... people in the class weren't very friendly." "...seemed to be quieter than..." " a maths .... There, that group started whispering and pointing at..." " to introduce her his group of friends..." "...practically best friends ."In the next few months there was a big change in their relationship." "...avoided ..." "...changed..." "...saw..." "...got nervous...started..."

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